Sunday, June 28, 2009

Chapter 11 -- Preturn of Doctor Y.

As the limousine pulled up beside the curb, its left front tire hit a bump, partially rolling them up onto something.
"Back up a little," commanded the tall man in the back. The mechanical chauffeur did as he was told, without any static. The dapper passenger, already out of the car, gazed in a bit at his driver,
left hand with its long fingernails extended, (absently), like a bird's claw.
"He was supposed to reply", thought Doctor Y. "He must need an adjustment."

As the tall doctor straightened and turned, he looked down at the object, bent and picked it up.
"One of those paperbacks", he muttered.
But as he stood in the street, (there was almost never any traffic), trying to take in the title, the
sunlight was too bright on the book's yellow cover to make it out in the instant he was willing to give to it. What's more, as he squinted, he was also beginning to sweat on his upper lip and simply had to check the spirit gum under his catfish mustache with the nails of his right middle and index fingers.
Satisfied the glue was holding, and now aware the book was interfering with his overall persona,
he tried, (again absently), to set the book down on the limo's fender half-thinking its owner or
some interested passerby might collect it before his quick return.
As he moved away from the car it slid back into the street.

Recovering his real purpose, he strode quickly into the club entrance.


The flattish little box was still right there on the corner of the desk. It even had a thin coating of
dust. How foolish of him to leave it here after all of that precise planning!
Jampers appeared as though he were asleep, his head on the desk.
Doctor Y. lifted the box carefully, using the nails of his hand (like a carnival claw machine),
raised it to his 'gleeful visage' and slid the damnable thing into his jacket pocket.
He hurriedly exited, before anyone else might arrive.


Emerging again, he lightly touches his lapel area to be sure this time of its content, skirts past the black dog nearby, and seats himself in the back of the limousine, immediately calm and collected.
The mechanical chauffeur winds out with the ragged, "a--round--the--block--ik?"
"Rudimentary, my dear 235X12", the living one effuses. As the two pull away and proceed up
the avenue, taking the peeling right turn at the Bridge toward the ocean, just in view, and around the coast road to his personal sanctum.

3 comments:

7 devonapes said...

Another great chapter. :)

Not sure how to 'comment' in any way whatsoever on this story, to tell the truth, though am enjoying what I'm reading nevertheless. Am simply not 'well read' enough to bluff my way through some kind of half-baked opinion on this or that. However, will say that the story so far is both unique in its telling, and that am digging the intricate layering of each new chapter over that of the last or early entries - the whole ''nother angle' thing being presented while still keeping the story moving forward. Such a strange and unusual device which must be maddening to keep up if not 'sketched out' prior (obviously). The fact that you can keep up a coherent narrative throughout all this is pretty damn impressive and just goes to show the kind of talent one must possess to keep up the trickery of such a piece.

Anyway... I can see how this particular project could go on for a long while yet, and surely hope it does - even though a conclusion is already devised.

So, just who the hell is Y. Ganh Longh (or Creighton Q. Crampton?), and what's in the damn box? And one last question:

Where the fuck are all you Grimes fans??

7/1/09 4:20 AM

paraphilia said...

paraphilia said...

Rick, I'm so glad I found your site - plus the fansite. I've wanted to get back in touch for ages. Shit happens and I lost your address. CREATION books also took your story out of the last reprint without even my knowledge. Sorry.

I have a new project here;
www.paraphiliamagazine.com
also info at
www.myspace.com/paraphiliamagazine

It would be good to get back in touch.
Dave Mitchell

7/4/09 9:39 AM

Rick Grimes said...

[ Sorry if it looks like I made these comments up myself. I didn't, Honest!

Accidentally let Dave's email address slip throo, and the only way I could see to remove it was to 'copy & paste' and re-sign in 'as' them...hence the doubling of dates, and missing Blogger emblem.]